My group and I created this storyboard together
Tuesday, 10 November 2015
Monday, 9 November 2015
Feedback Questions and Answers
What are your transitions like?
They will be very fast and occasionally fade into each other
How do you suggest it’s a flashback?
In editing, I will colour grade the scene by adjusting the saturation
How are you going to create a sense of fear?
we're going to try and add some jump scares and very fast and loud scenes
Remember this is a horror film - how will you use and subvert tropes of horror
In most horror films, the main characters are usually in a hetronormative sphere, whereas the main character in our film is not straight
Horror Film Trailer Treatment
The movie starts off with Eve who is the main character. She
has an attraction towards her best friend Madison, which she cannot explain.
One day she decides to go out with her and confess her true feelings. Once they
find themselves in the woods, Eve stops and tells Madison everything she has
been feeling for the past few months.
However Eve is shocked by the response which is mainly
rejection and fear. Madison tries to get away from her and rejects the idea
that they could ever be more than just friends. Eve does not understand why Maddie
is suddenly so cold hearted and tries to come closer to her. Eventually without
any intention, Eve grabs the hands of her best friend and then forces and
pushes her against a tree repeatedly, hurting her head and causing for her to
collapse on the floor. Her friend is unconscious or dead but neither Eve nor
the audience know what the real circumstance of the friend’s condition is at
this point.
Eve goes home and is almost unsure whether what just happened
was real or not. Her outrageous behaviour is quite unusual for such a nice and
quiet girl, however Eve shocked herself with what she is capable of. That night Eve tries to get some sleep and
forget all about the incident, through sweating and paranoia, she finally
manages to fall asleep and forget for a while
Months later, Eve finds herself almost glued to her bed and
her house. She is afraid to go out because she feels like she doesn’t deserve
to be in the real world anymore. She goes to work and returns. No outdoors
routines like jogging or walking in the park. Especially not the woods. Eve has
not been in the woods in months and after her friend was reported missing, she
didn’t dare to hang out with any old friends that her and Maddie hanged out
with before. This however, does not become suspicious to anyone, Eve is a quiet
girl who has always had quite an antisocial nature, and she could never hurt a
fly.
Eve is paranoid with nightmares every night and she cannot
take away the guilt which overwhelms her. When she is awake, her visions become
so vivid and Madison is everywhere she turns. One moment Maddie tells Eve that
everything is ok and the other, her figure crumbles into pieces and dust. Or
one moment Eve is embracing Maddie and the other, she is slitting her throat
gruesomely. Bold red blood covering her hands like they covered the tree in the
woods. Maddie is dead, she must be dead,
Eve tells herself and brushes off the horrid visions.
A year later, and Eve is still stuck in time with the same
old visions. Her art is not the same anymore. She, is not the same anymore. The
sleepless nights and morning coffees are monotonous and dry routines for her.
Until one night. When there is a knock at the door. Eve hasn’t invited anyone
over and no one thinks of making unwanted surprise visits anymore, they haven’t
in months anyway. Eve walks slowly, cat like towards the door. The hallway
seems long and the floor ice cold. The knock repeats itself in steady beats.
One two, One two, One Two Three.
Eve gets to the door and looks through the door Viewer. A
blurred figure becomes clear as she blinks. Maddie. Her heart stops and her
body freezes. Her palms cry with sweat and she rubs her eyes and looks through
the door viewer once again. Maddie looks impatient, she looks scared and her
hair is wet and messy. She is wearing the exact same clothes she was wearing
when they went to the woods.
Eve pulls away the chains from the door and unlocks it
slowly, and Madison smiles at her and starts hugging her. Eve is obviously
surprised and freezes in shock, she tells Madison the nature of her supposed
disappearance and questions her. Madison calmly reassures her that she has not
been missing and suggests that Eve may have been imagining the whole incident.
Eve does not question this and Madison figures that Eve does not remember her
murder. Eve starts seriously questioning her sanity; she now increasingly stays
inside, very rarely goes out. Her dreams disappear and nightmare is now
reality. Madison now frequently visits her, phones her and is constantly in
Eve’s life. This aspect drives the protagonist into further madness.
Horror Film Trailer Script
Script
Two young girls playing in the woods, holding hands.
Eve: (voiceover) We
did everything together
Girls playing; ‘ring around the roses’
Eve: (Voiceover) The
wood was our place… our secret place.
A scene of the two girls in the
present time
Eve tries to chase Madison
Madison: (faintly
smiling) Eve, stop we are not kids anymore.
Eve: (voiceover) We were
inseparable.
Eve: (voiceover) Until that day…
Close up of Eve with a distorted and angry face, and then cuts to a
scene to which Eve slams Madison into the tree.
Eve wakes up from her bed. Looking very distressed- bad dream.
Next scene
Eve is making a cup of tea, close up on tea.
Eve (Voiceover): I haven’t been
sleeping well for a long time. And I didn’t know why…
Shot of Eve and her friend sitting on the couch, speaking.
Eve: I feel like I’m
going crazy, I keep seeing her in my dreams
Friend: It’s been a
year; she’s not here anymore. Please get
over her Eve.
Next scene
Eve is in her bed, contemplating.
*Knock Knock Knock
Close up of Eve’s anxious face
Shot of the door, and the knocking continues, only continuously and
louder.
Eve looks scared
Knocking continues in a thunderous rage. Eve gets up from her bed and
opens the door.
Madison: (smiling, and tilting her head) Hey Eve.
Eve gasps and there is a close up of her shutting her eyes. She opens
her eyes again. There is no one in the doorway, Eve closes the door and sighs
in relief. She turns around and finds Eve right up close to her, side view
shot.
Madison: (Smiling and says quietly) Boo.
Close up of Eve looking scared.
Next scene
Madison: What’s up Eve, you look like you’ve seen a ghost.
Eve starts having distorted visions.
Next scene
Eve is walking in an isolated pathway with a park nearby. She looks
behind her and vaguely sees Madison in the bush.
Eve is on the phone.
Eve: I think I’m going mad…
Eve is speaking to her friend through the telephone. And we can see her
holding the receiver.
Eve’s Friend: What really happened that night?
*the phone line dies*
Madison’s voice on the phone: Yeah Eve. Tell her what happened. Tell
her how you killed me.
*Eve is breathing heavily and
then she drops her phone*
New Scene.
*Madison hums childhood song in the woods*
Eve is behind a tree and makes a frightened noise. Maddie hears this
and heads in Eve’s direction.
Cut to the scene in which Madison slices the tree behind which Eve was
hiding with a knife.
There is a close up shot of running feet and then a quick shot from the
back of Eve running and she blurs out into the distance as Maddie’s back comes
into focus.
A close up of Madison’s face.
Madison: I’m going to get you Eve.
Quick Shots of the main characters, Eve and Madison.
Scenes of Eve punching a wall. Of her closing her eyes, holding a knife
and a scene of her slamming Maddie’s head onto the tree.
Quick shot of Eve in the cemetery visiting Madison’s grave. A shot of
the grave from behind captures Eve looking at the grave and young Madison
appearing behind her.
* Eve turns around*
*Young Maddison is running
away*
Eve: Come back!
*Young Maddison is laughing
as she is running away from Eve.*
*Scene of Eve punching the
wall*
*Scene of Eve on her knees, exhausted*
* close up of Eve breathing heavily*
*far away shot of Eve on the ground on her knees and young Maddison is
coming near her*
·
Close up of Maddie whispering in Eve’s ear*
Madison: We can be
together again Eve
*Scene of Eve gasping
in shock*
*Tone card presenting
movie title*
THE END
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